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Fri Jul 25, 2008, 9:50 AM
  • Mood: Dazed
  • Reading: Sherman Alexie: Diary of a Part-Time Indian
  • Drinking: Diet Coke
I wish there was a mixed feelings icon on this thing. I just had my MA coursework back, and as a dirent result I am feeling all of the following things:

Relieved :phew:

I admit I would have liked slightly better marks - just a little bit better - but the numbers don't mean as much to me as the accompanying comments, and I've had almost nothing but praise about my prose fiction writing abilities. I mean, I've had constructive criticism too, obviously - but my confidence has grown in that particular medium, anyway.

Discouraged :cries:

I have had pretty bad comments about the drama and the poetry. It cut me pretty deep to read that one of my poems was 'over-written'! :O Apparently it was my prose fiction that stopped me from getting bad marks in that one class.

Recently I've been losing confidence in those two media anyway. I've entered a couple of poetry competitions this year, both of which were won by a teacher on my course. Not winning is okay, but losing twice to somebody I know personally... it's very frustrating!

I'm putting the finishing touches to my script for `Beccalicious's contest, because I really feel that I should enter, but I have very little confidence in it. :sniff:

Annoyed :disbelief:

As well as my own coursework, I also got all the coursework of another student. I know her, and I got quite friendly with her, but that doesn't affect the issue. It's a serious breach of confidentiality, sending coursework to the wrong people. I've e-mailed the course administrator, and hopefully she'll send me a pre-paid envelope or something. It's three thick folders - it would cost me a fortune to send it back all on my own. They won't expect me to do that, but anyway, it's an inconvenience for me and this other student!

They really are very badly organised on that course - I notice it, like, all the time. :roll:

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Features


Box of Words Feature 2: Escape







Tots and Teens: The Children's Literature Contest

First Place Winners

In Poetry

:winner: 'Bff' by ~tricksyriver



This is a sweet, childish poem that becomes increasingly more than a sweet, childish poem every time you read it. I love the imagery, the evocativeness and the quirky turn of phrase. The poet makes excellent use of recurring images of nature and food that allude to the growth of the child, both physically and mentally. This poem takes me right back.

In Fiction: 12 and Under

:winner: 'Magic' by *ElectroBaby



As we know, the line between reality and fantasy becomes increasingly sharper as we grow. This is a timeless theme in children's literature, and here *ElectroBaby finds yet another new way of exploring it. She tells a charming story of a girl who is growing up, but is determined never to let go of her belief in magic.

In Teen Fiction

:winner: 'Because...' by ~RockerLane1110



What impresses me most about this, next to the quality of writing, is the amount the author is able to achieve in such a very short piece. There must be so many stories inside every school. Did you ever think about who else might have sat at your desk on any given day? We have here five pieces of flash fiction in which five characters are quickly and skilfully carfted to their full, and which all come together to form one complete story.

Second Place Winners

In Poetry

:trophy: 'The Dragons' Way' by `Rushy



This is a fun, well structured little poem that I can just imagine lavishly illustrated in a tall, wide, thin paperback. `Rushy's descriptions of dragons can hardly fail to appeal to a child's imagination.

In Fiction: 12 and Under

:trophy: 'The Together Rings' by *msklystron



Jewellery can have immense significance to little girls. Sometimes entire friendships can rest on it. This is a charming, beautifully written story that explores this theme, with a balance of fantasy and realism that the author gets exactly right.

In Teen Fiction

:trophy: The Green Dragon - Chapter 11 by *BlueShadowM



I don't need to tell you how popular fantasy stories are with children and teenagers these days. I was touched when I learned that *BlueShadowM had gone to the trouble of translating a chapter of her novel from its original Swedish just for us, and when I read it, the piece latched right onto my imagination. The characters, the settings and the intriguing mysteries come together to make this a rip-roaring good read!

Honourable Mentions

In Teen Fiction

Claire's Journey: Chapter 6 by ~TheEyeShield only narrowly missed out on second place. The author shows us a glimpse of the life of a teenage girl going through some hard times, and he manages to do so without being sensationalist. I find this character, her problems and her relationships very believable.

Bad Accent by =illuminara beautifully captures the teenage voice. The author has gone with the tradition of following a male/female friendship and, of course, the problems therein - and she's done it better than a lot of published authors can!

The Black Forest: Part 1 by ~darkelfrising caught my attention because I'm a sucker for the old classic fairytale with a twist. I recommend that you take a look at what this very skilled fantasy writer has done with 'Hansel and Gretel'.

In Fiction: 12 and Under

I Love You Mother by ~IrrevocableFate is a sadly sweet little story that I know would appeal to the imaginations of children. Like our two winners, it has a fantasy element that adds real charm to the tale.

Shaking Dreamcatchers by ~RockerLane1110 deals well with a sensitive subject, and tugs on the heartstrings.

In Poetry

War Memories by =Yuskity, according to the author, still needs some work. If that's true, she at least has a promising start with this jaunty, well-structured poem whose macabre element I am sure children would relish.

Devious Comments

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:hug: Don't sweat it! You're just having an off time, but your poetry and prose is wonderful! Everyone goes through these kinds of phases - even the brilliant ones! :nod:

Try to not worry so much. You are a fantastic writer. I still like your works. :)

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"The hardest person to know is yourself. Get to know yourself and you'll have a friend for life."
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:hug: Your works are inspiring to me. As long as your true to your own art and form of writing, that's all that matters. Just take care, and don't stress too much.

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Never let anyone tell you about you.
I'll join in on the :hug:-ing, because I think you're wonderful. :aww:

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I know you said no compliments, but I just have to.

You are amazing. A teacher once said to me that even if the assignments aren't up to par, there's a natural talent that they just can't teach.

You've got that, hun. Don't lose confidence. :hug:

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Well thank you.

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:hug:

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Thanks.

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Okay I'll try not to! :faint:

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Awesome. Cause, like, seeing something you wrote in my DA inbox-thing makes my day.

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Which is easier to write well?

63%
66 deviants said Open poetry
19%
20 deviants said Fixed poetry
18%
19 deviants said I don't know because I don't write poetry

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Suggested Writing Exercises

:bulletgreen: You Are ... Incarnate!
Start with a character sketch. This character is something incarnate. Anger? Misery? Happiness? Annoyance? There are loads to choose from! What qualities and characteristics does this person have? How old is he or she? Which is it: he or she? You know the kind of thing. Finally, what is this character's story? Write it!

:bulletgreen: Word Play:
Write out a list of words with at least two very distinct, very different meanings e.g. match, race, date etc. Write down some clever little phrases, metaphors, whole sentences, etc. that play on the meanings of these words. Once you've done that, I think you'll find you have the beginnings of a poem. So develop it!

Past exercises are available in my Writing Exercise Archive. If you try any of these exercises, I'd love to see them, so do please submit your efforts and post a link at the archive.

*ThornyEnglishRose recommends the writings of...

=vix0r
=ghostlove
~JoieD
`WineWriter
`Beccalicious
~tricksyriver
~Silica-Streak
~MiNiSoRcErEsS
~CynicalRomantic
~callyn
^fllnthblnk
~critical-condition
~BordynConfoosed
~hustle-flow
~ohfever
~sinisterguffaw
~TheTwelve
=Iscariot-Priest
=Waltz-With-Me
=illuminara
~Clippers0507
~RockerLane1110
*poisonedrose
`Flutterings
~artistic-poet
*orphicfiddler
~Unaccompanied-me

The Lit. GMs

^StJoan
^LadyLincoln
^fllnthblnk
^SparrowSong

Suggest a lit. DD today! :D

Lit. Clubs and Projects*

:bulletred: *simplyprose
:bulletred: *simplypoetry
:bulletpurple: *writeaway
:bulletpurple: =PoetryPlease
:bulletpurple: *ProsePlease
:bulletpurple: *Writers-Workshop
:bulletpurple: =Inked-Page
:bulletpurple: =Writers-Slam
:bulletblue: *VampireWriters
:bulletblue: *The-Novelist-Club
:bulletblue: ~PoeticPath
:bulletblue: =Wordspill

*Key:
:bulletred: Highly recommended, and I am on the staff
:bulletpurple: Highly recommended
:bulletblue: Recommended

External Websites for Writers

:bulletred: The Writers' Workshop
:bulletred: Directory of Literary Agents (UK)
:bulletgreen: The Writers' Advice Centre for Children's Books
:bulletgreen: Adventures in Fiction: Mentoring and Manuscript Appraisal
:bulletblue: Brittle Star Magazine
:bulletblue: Mslexia (publishes only women, but is packed with useful resources for everyone)
:bulletblue: Irk Magazine (for writers and all visual artists)
:bulletblue: 14 Magazine (for poems of 14 lines only)
:bulletblue: Samsara Poetry Online Magazine
:bulletblue: Chick Flicks Ezine
:bulletblue: FrightFiction.com: Bringing ghost stories back from the dead (ezine)
:bulletblue: The Recusant: Non-Conformist Poetry, Prose, Polemic (ezine)
:bulletblue: Spark Bright: an online literary magazine that welcomes any and all submissions; run by our very own *almalobana
:bulletpurple: Cinnamon Press (independent publisher)
:bulletpurple: Bluemoose Books (independent publisher)

Please inform me of any broken links, and feel free to contact me if you want to recommend a website.

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