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A Coke and Two Straws by *ThornyEnglishRose:iconThornyEnglishRose:


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Submitted: July 26, 2008
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Well, I've had some trouble, but I've finally managed to come up with something for `Beccalicious's contest! :phew:

I honestly don't know if I'll have time to revise this before the August 4th deadline, but on the off chance that I do, please give me your suggestions. For example, I know that the closing scene feels rather rushed. I'm just not sure what else there is to say - or maybe it should be scrapped altogether? (I'd have time to do that, at any rate!)

Please point out typos. Thank you.

Whatever the play may be like, I've put it into PDF format so it looks all nice. Click Download to download.

Edit: Damn it... the preview image has gone wrong for some reason. You can't see it, right?

Edit 2: Ah, and it's fixed itself. Hmm... :confused: There had better not be any typos after all this! :cries:
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There isn't a picture. :P i wanted to read that poem

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Well, I'm saying the preview image now. There's nothing else I can do.

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I see the preview image, but not the Lit... :(
DA is being a dirty elephant today.
It's downloading fine for me. You are clicking Download?

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No, it was like 5am and I was clicking dumbass apparently :confused:
I really like the pkay, and I was amazed at how it ended up. Love the meassage:heart:

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There we sat in snow
All that time she was silent still
So if you love me
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Cool, thanks! :D

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your welcome of caorse!:heart:

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"I took my love down to violet hill
There we sat in snow
All that time she was silent still
So if you love me
Won't you let me know? "
~ "Violet hill", Coldplay
Hello there

Thank you for your submission to the One Act Scriptwriting contest.

This is just a confirmation that your entry has been received and follows the contest rules. Therefore it will be judged after the 4th August 2008 for the competition.

Thank you and good luck!

Becca

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